Author Topic: Broken  (Read 1000 times)

manyakihiro

Broken
« on: June 13, 2009, 03:22:26 am »
(ni Lilom Anahaw)

Broken, the man is.
Seemingly in control,
  but  is  hollow within.
Indescribable sorrows, dire misery-
They take away Life from
   the grasp of his hands.

Smiling, but feigning sadness,
He continues.
Only his mind knows
The thinness of the air he breathes,
The pale, insipid blood
   that runs in his veins.


DjDaveTrance

Re: Broken
« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2009, 03:31:36 am »
Opz!! I think ORIGINAL POETRY ata dapat dito,
Yung kaw may gawa!!

Nice post anyway!!


Kurimasu

Re: Broken
« Reply #2 on: June 13, 2009, 03:38:17 am »
Ganda, gusto ko yung title nung time na broken ako. ayyyy, hindi pala broken yung time ko na yun, broke lang pala. naubusan ako ng budget e. Bwahahahahahaha  toast::
Dark for fear of failure an inner gloom as wide as an eye and fermenting roiling hate death grip in my veins unveiling rancid petals flowering forth foul nectar the space between a blink and a tear ...death blooms...

manyakihiro

Re: Broken
« Reply #3 on: June 13, 2009, 03:44:34 am »
Opz!! I think ORIGINAL POETRY ata dapat dito,
Yung kaw may gawa!!

Nice post anyway!!

isa po sa multiple personality ni boy manyak-ihiro.   malayo lang ang trips nila sa isat-isa hehe, kaya nilagyan ko po name...nextime di ko nalagyan name para di makalito  ;D. thanks po!

Kurimasu

Re: Broken
« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2009, 03:47:33 am »
isa po sa multiple personality ni boy manyak-ihiro.   malayo lang ang trips nila sa isat-isa hehe, kaya nilagyan ko po name...nextime di ko nalagyan name para di makalito  ;D. thanks po!



may multiple personaliy ka pala kapatid, bwahahahahahaha, ako personality ko 1/2 na lang. hindi ko pa nahanap yung ibang ako kahapon e. I'm still putting myself together. Sana mahanap ko na yung iba. Nice poem. finger4u toast::
Dark for fear of failure an inner gloom as wide as an eye and fermenting roiling hate death grip in my veins unveiling rancid petals flowering forth foul nectar the space between a blink and a tear ...death blooms...

DjDaveTrance

Re: Broken
« Reply #5 on: June 13, 2009, 03:51:45 am »
isa po sa multiple personality ni boy manyak-ihiro.   malayo lang ang trips nila sa isat-isa hehe, kaya nilagyan ko po name...nextime di ko nalagyan name para di makalito  ;D. thanks po!

Ah kaya pala!!
hehehe nakakalilito lang kasi!

Tuloy ang ligaya!!
 toast::

sapik75

Re: Broken
« Reply #6 on: June 13, 2009, 09:15:10 am »
Nice one bro...


Once I was...
Now I am Longing...
But never contemplated...
The blessed day thy come...
And all that have been broken...
Will rise and be rebuilt... finger4u

manyakihiro

Re: Broken
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2009, 05:55:56 pm »
hmmm... mali gamit ko ng word feign.  kelangan baguhin bago isave sa archives ko hehe toast:: toast::

chibog09

Re: Broken
« Reply #8 on: August 30, 2009, 02:47:30 am »
ayos lang yan boss , , nice poem! dami palang makata dito, mapababae o mapalalake man!