Author Topic: a letter from Tierra  (Read 502 times)

Pierro7

a letter from Tierra
« on: February 22, 2009, 10:15:11 am »
Ciel,

this feeling...
it will start as a small seedling.
and with the caress of your rainfall.
it will eventually grow into something.

something that can conquer everything.
something that can't be prevented.
something that is in everyone.
something that spreads all over the world.

this seedling...
it would be nice if it will be like a flower.
so beautiful, so attractive.
and gives smile as long as they live.

i want to bloom like the others.
with the shine of sun on their surface.
i want to dance like the others.
with the wind that you blew with ease.

this flower...
it is tied to the ground,
and you're over the earth.
it ended up waiting upon your rain.

i want wings to fly up there.
knockin' up your door.
waiting for your rainfall.
waiting for your smile.

this wings...
wants to gamble and grab your clouds...
it can see them getting dark.
it indicates rain and also night time.

but i don't want to this wings to wither,
with night barging in and breaking my dreams.
it will shiver and numb in cold winter,
it will be blind in darkness.

this feeling...
i don't want it to grow more further.
i may not be deserving for the rain of yours.
i'm happy with a little drizzle of friendship.

- Tierra

xx oo xx Ox OX
^_^

this poem is related to Flower to You but with a lesser level of feeling (crush)
A person becomes strong by accepting their fears.

IWM

Re: a letter from Tierra
« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2009, 04:21:52 pm »
Bro, I really like your style in making poetry. Very unique and creative. Galing nitong entry na to, and so are your other entries. Gold finger for you.
NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='( 
"Without evil, there can be no good. So it must be good to be evil sometimes." ;D

Pierro7

Re: a letter from Tierra
« Reply #2 on: February 24, 2009, 08:30:50 am »
creative at unique?...hindi ko inaasahan yun...
but anyway...
salamat po sa appreciation at sa finger. ehehe
A person becomes strong by accepting their fears.