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tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« on: February 11, 2009, 09:52:44 pm »
(walang title na tula)

Kahit na ilang beses akong mabigo
Patuloy pa din akong kakatok sa iyong pinto
Dahil ang pag ibig ko sa iyo ay wagas
Sunugin mo man at buhusan ng gaas

Wala na akong ibang nais pa
Pigilan man ako ng isang libong sumpa
Ang nais ko lang ay mahawakan ka
Samahan mo na din ng halik at bukaka
(pero joke lang yan nasa taas, optional kumbaga)
(eto ang totoo) Damhin ang matatamis mong halik sa aking mukha

Ngunit bakit sa tuwing ako ay nandito
Ikaw ay parang lumalayo
Ang puso mo ba'y patuloy na bilanggo
Sa ex boypren mong manyakis at mukhang kwago

Kung tayo ay talagang magkaibigan lang
Pwede ba kitang hagkan kahit isang beses lamang
Gusto ko itong iparamdam sa iyo
Ang ari kong tayong tayo
(oooopps optional ulit yan, hehe)
(eto na ulit ang totoo) At baka ang isip mo'y biglang magbago


hehehe comments naman po kung ok lang o pangit hehe ^^
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2009, 09:57:49 pm »
natawa ako dun ah  :D :D
galing ng pagkakagawa

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2009, 09:58:53 pm »
wala ka ngang magawa...  ;D

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2009, 10:02:46 pm »
nakakaaliw! nice one budz!  toast::

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2009, 10:07:24 pm »
nice nice toast::

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2009, 10:07:24 pm »
natawa ako dun ah  :D :D
galing ng pagkakagawa

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Thank you po, kasi kagabi sa hospital mga alas dos ng madaling araw wala na akong ginagawa, wala nang gamot na bibigay sa mga pasyente saka tulog na mga pasyente, nakakita ko notebook kaya yun, sulat sulat hehe.
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 02:36:16 pm »
galing pre..susunod ka ba sa yapak ng nag-iisang pilyong makata na si deosh_pilyo? hehe
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2009, 03:59:56 pm »
Try ko po manong!
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #8 on: February 27, 2010, 11:04:57 pm »
nawala antok ko dito sir ! finger4u

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #9 on: February 28, 2010, 01:08:04 am »
Galing mo tol..... ::goldfingerplease

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #10 on: February 28, 2010, 01:10:17 am »
Galing mo tol..... ::goldfingerplease

Oh yayk!!!!! mali napindot ko..Im giving GF not asking .....

Here.... finger4u

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #11 on: March 02, 2010, 03:35:19 am »
hahahah kapilyuhan nga naman :applause

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #12 on: March 02, 2010, 04:07:21 am »
Thanks thanks ^_^
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #13 on: March 02, 2010, 04:10:15 am »
Nag anniversary na pala itong tula na ito nung feb 11 haha. Gawa ako ulit. Post ko agad dito.  ::inposition
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #14 on: March 02, 2010, 12:26:06 pm »
hahaha nice nice! galing naman!
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #15 on: March 03, 2010, 07:14:54 pm »
makata!  :applause
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #16 on: March 03, 2010, 07:24:36 pm »
Salamat po :-*
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #17 on: March 03, 2010, 08:09:40 pm »
galing may optional pah , hehehe . . . ::pampam

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #18 on: March 03, 2010, 09:23:20 pm »
ayos ang galing, nakakatawa... ::lmao

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #19 on: March 04, 2010, 05:01:41 am »
@melyer, kaw yung gumagawa ng tula na bisaya diba?
NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='(   NAWAWALA YUNG SIG KO... ='( 
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #20 on: May 06, 2011, 01:46:45 am »
lol halata ngang walang magawa ^_^ pero ayos ah khit walang magawa nkagawa ka ng tuwang nakakatuwa ^^ P.S. ms mganda siguro kung instead na kwago tuko nalang ang gamitin mo mas magkasingpunto kasi ^^ (optional lang rin nman)  ::pampam

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #21 on: May 06, 2011, 01:49:01 am »
two years na pala ito, salamat sa pag basa ecks!
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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #22 on: September 01, 2011, 07:42:26 pm »
 finger4u galing... :applause

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #23 on: October 16, 2011, 07:23:42 am »
panalo ito. .  pwede. .  :applause toast::

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Re: tula / poem ng isang walang magawa
« Reply #24 on: October 17, 2011, 01:12:43 am »
ok na ok sabi ni signature ni jnll_man! boy optional! heheh
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