Author Topic: The World's Papers  (Read 727 times)

icecoldchiq

The World's Papers
« on: July 15, 2013, 12:59:11 am »
No words could explain what I feel for you
Not even the natural forces of the universe
Not the sun, not the moon, Not even the stars…
The flowers of spring isn’t good enough
Nor the butterflies from the west
Not the glowing insects of the night
I couldn’t find the right words, not the best.

The best that could fit the exact same way that I feel for you
That’s why I’m speechless when I’m with you,
When I stare at you… Emotions inside me stir in delight.
Sometimes when I’m cold and numb
When it feels like I hate you, it’s not true.
I just nurture the pain that I feel inside,
The pain that I feel when I miss you…

And if you ask me to write down just how I feel for you
Not even all the papers in the world would be enough


To put down in words how much I love you.
Loved the Beard :)

maniac2999

Re: The World's Papers
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 01:16:56 am »
ano nga po ba tawag dun sa poems na walang rhyme? hindi naman haiku ito no?

icecoldchiq

Re: The World's Papers
« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2013, 08:27:43 am »
ano nga po ba tawag dun sa poems na walang rhyme? hindi naman haiku ito no?

It's called free verse. This has rhyme pero may nakalapat siya na pattern. If you'll just read it, hindi mo makikita. Try reading it out loud.
Loved the Beard :)

maniac2999

Re: The World's Papers
« Reply #3 on: July 16, 2013, 09:49:22 pm »
It's called free verse. This has rhyme pero may nakalapat siya na pattern. If you'll just read it, hindi mo makikita. Try reading it out loud.

hmm.. may nadaanan po akong isa, anyway, ayun free verse nga ata hehe