Topic: PROMISES - by CB

[Cheesybrains]

Promises

Promises are words spoken

Though they usually came to be broken

And they sometimes hurt a person’s heart

To make our lives fall apart

And destroy someone’s’ dreams

To fail; what it seems

But to a million people who broke promises

Only a hundred of them completed such promises

And from a hundred cheers

Only one stays for years…

But everyone of us always commit too many of them

Promises that only some were satisfied to them

And here am I sayin’

That of many times I made promises fallin’

Only one promise was made to be fulfilled

And a promise that I never revealed

Even though I stayed out way too late

I always trust my one and never ending faith

And that promise is to stay single as long as I can

And I thought it seems to be done

Just this single promise I can stay along

To where it’s melody have never gone wrong

Every lines of it had come so definitely sure

For a broken heart; it may cure

For a long lost heroic love…

That I was dreamin’ to have,

And I wish someday, someone will come to me as one,

To love, care and cherish for me as my very first special someone,

But I know that a first relationship is not an easy one.

So tell me frankly, if you think you’re the ONE...

[zedlareg]

nice nice nice... kala ko promises by cranberries.... hehehe 

[procrastinator]

astig ganda nmn.. promise to stay single.. tsk2 bitter ka cguro nu? haha ask ko lng

[ytserresty]

Bro... tingin ko na restrict yung tung poem na to nung mga rhymes... tingin ko pwede mo pa i-edit ito without the rhymes... let this poem free...

Anyways, I enjoyed reading :-)

[Cheesybrains]

Haha, Thanks ha! Medyo bitter nga ako! Pero noon pa naman to, eto po kasi ang original na poem ko.. and I dont plan to change any lines, kung ok lng sa inyo mag post pa ako ng marami png free rhymed poems, marami kasi akong naisulat nung time na na-inlove ako at nabigo ako for the first time... halos mapuno ung isang notebook... Thanks sa comment!

[Cheesybrains]

tsaka kung sino man sa inyo marunong mag translate nito sa tagalog or bisaya i'll be very glad.... TY!