Topic: For you by Ariescian

[akuirino]

I’ve been in journey all my life
For someone who, will love and care

Each step I take leads me to nothing
Every stop I made makes me think I’m hopeless

I’ve reach the edge, of a mountain top
Seen lovely scenery, in a whole lop

I’ve made rhythm, create a tone
Yet I have no one to mold it like bone

In a blast, lighting has struck
Who light the path I’m walking with luck

Burned the hopeless thoughts I have
Plant a seed, watered my love

My life has turn, from off to on
Like street lights, stop and go on

My journey finds a shed I can rest
And my heart beats and birds nest

This ode is for you to kept
A sign of my love and thankfulness too dept

I may fade like tone I create
Let its rhythm echo forever with berate
 
My art has found its replica
And my soul sought its Art

[P***sDeMilo]

ganda naman!

[akuirino]

Salamat! 

[Pope John Pervs]

" This ode is for you to kept
A sign of my love and thankfulness too dept "

it should be "... thankfulness too depth"

wala kabang spell checker? Fail   

[comsci24]

" This ode is for you to kept
A sign of my love and thankfulness too dept "

it should be "... thankfulness too depth"

wala kabang spell checker? Fail   

If there was an error, you should correct the TS in a proper manner, wala tayo sa humor boards para mag patawa. It's insulting the way you point out his mistake. Next time if anything needs to be corrected please say it to the TS in a fashion that is not degrading.

[Jay Candolita]

I think it should be "-to keep" and "-too deep"
,just my opinion..