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BlueAlphaZero

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Bukas
« on: March 18, 2010, 01:03:38 pm »
Bukas

Hayaan na nating dumating
ang bukas

sapagkat di naman natin
ito mapipigilan

Ngunit sa gabing ito,
tayo’y magkasama
 
Dumating man ang bukas,
magkapayos natin itong
babatiin

nang walang bahid ng
pagsisi
sa ating puso
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Re: Bukas
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2010, 04:38:13 pm »
Bukas

Hayaan na nating dumating
ang bukas

sapagkat di naman natin
ito mapipigilan

Ngunit sa gabing ito,
tayo’y magkasama
 
Dumating man ang bukas,
magkapayos natin itong  > > magkayapos <<  ata ito?
babatiin

nang walang bahid ng
pagsisi
sa ating puso

When you brighten another's path, you also brighten your own. - Transsiberian (2008)

BlueAlphaZero

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Re: Bukas
« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2010, 11:16:29 am »


That's right. Here's the correct version.

Bukas

Hayaan na nating dumating
ang bukas

sapagkat di naman natin
ito mapipigilan

Ngunit sa gabing ito,
tayo’y magkasama
 
Dumating man ang bukas,
magkayapos natin itong
babatiin

nang walang bahid ng
pagsisi
sa ating puso
Custodite fideliter quod quae credita est fideliter ad vos.

perfectionist

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Re: Bukas
« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2010, 11:56:08 am »
Kung kinakailangang utangin ko ang bukas, gagawin ko makasama ka lang ngayon. (sinabi sakin ng gf ko ngayon ngayon lang)

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nice poem  ::inlove
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Re: Bukas
« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2010, 12:18:06 pm »
Hmm BAZ,seems you're not alone being inspired &  savoring a counted moments left -ahaha
Savor the moments guys",)

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