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dArkb0y21

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pamatay na poem!
« on: March 01, 2010, 12:08:29 pm »
                                "Treasured Love"

                         Touch me with your eyes
                         Caress me with your look
                           Let this love be writtin
                           In cupid's golden book

                        Taunt me with your smile
                       And words of tendersness
                             Diminish my fears
                         And cure my lonelyness

                       Grasp my heart of passion
                   Heal the scars old love have left
                       Kill the doubt i kept hiddin
                      Tame this quickend breath
 
                    Dont abuse this love I'm giving
                    I'ts a treasure few have found
                  Yours to me will be more precious
                       Than jewels set in a crown

                           This gift of love i offer
                         Possesess all i call mine
                  Be carefull with your commitment
                      Forever is a long, long time


sana magustohan nyu to!! isang linggo kung ginawa yan! pwahahahaha
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2010, 03:29:37 am »
Ikaw pala may gawa Pre? akala ko si Balagtas eh! haha
May konting mga wrong spelling, pero ayos pre  :applause
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dArkb0y21

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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2010, 12:08:18 pm »
paki korek lang po ung mga mali! salamat! hehehe
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #3 on: March 02, 2010, 05:26:36 pm »
sa friend daw oh... pa demure pa oh... nice ulit!!!
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #4 on: December 31, 2010, 01:05:34 pm »

POoOoOoOoOotakti yan.

 ::redalert
Touch Me With Your Eyes
by Lubaina Rahil
sabi dito:
http://www.boloji.com/poetry/2100-2200/2179.htm

(Hindi ko na-check ang detalye n'yan, hay nako... aaksayahin ang oras ko sa pagbeberipika pa n'yan... Ganun din naman ang iba. Sabi sa iba "Untitled", o "THE GIFT OF LOVE", o "This Gift I Give"... hindi magbigay-credit ng tama.)
 ::investigate

Isang linggo mong sinadyang maliin ang mga spelling, ilang punctuation at grammar. O hindi na talaga maitama mula sa pagkaka-copy-paste.

Ayoko sa bulaan talaga.
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #5 on: December 31, 2010, 03:43:54 pm »
Quote from: Shadoufang on December 31, 2010, 01:05:34 pm
POoOoOoOoOotakti yan.

 ::redalert
Touch Me With Your Eyes
by Lubaina Rahil
sabi dito:
http://www.boloji.com/poetry/2100-2200/2179.htm

(Hindi ko na-check ang detalye n'yan, hay nako... aaksayahin ang oras ko sa pagbeberipika pa n'yan... Ganun din naman ang iba. Sabi sa iba "Untitled", o "THE GIFT OF LOVE", o "This Gift I Give"... hindi magbigay-credit ng tama.)
 ::investigate

Isang linggo mong sinadyang maliin ang mga spelling, ilang punctuation at grammar. O hindi na talaga maitama mula sa pagkaka-copy-paste.

Ayoko sa bulaan talaga.



ayun kumilos ang asset... ::inposition
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #6 on: December 31, 2010, 07:03:00 pm »
may barbero rin palang poet
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #7 on: January 01, 2011, 03:46:51 am »
dude wala kang rhyming. If it's a poem, dapat may rhyme.
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #8 on: January 01, 2011, 08:11:20 am »
Hay kawawa ka naman.
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #9 on: January 01, 2011, 08:23:19 am »
may barbero din palang tumutula... maggupit ka na lang...  ;D
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #10 on: January 01, 2011, 10:25:06 am »
Hindi ka pwedeng tawaging poet.. PUWET pwede pa...  ;D ;D
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #11 on: January 01, 2011, 10:44:27 pm »
Quote from: erap on January 01, 2011, 10:25:06 am
Hindi ka pwedeng tawaging poet.. PUWET pwede pa...  ;D ;D
   ::lmao ::lmao ::lmao
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Re: pamatay na poem!
« Reply #12 on: January 02, 2011, 11:38:01 am »
actually ikaw ang kaunaunahang barbero ngayong 2011... bali-balita magugunaw ang mundo ng 2012, at least may 1 year ka pa para magbago...
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