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Espiya Lobby => ESPIYA Cafe => Original Poetry => : manyakihiro June 13, 2009, 03:22:26 AM

: Broken
: manyakihiro June 13, 2009, 03:22:26 AM

(ni Lilom Anahaw)

Broken, the man is.
Seemingly in control,
  but  is  hollow within.
Indescribable sorrows, dire misery-
They take away Life from
   the grasp of his hands.

Smiling, but feigning sadness,
He continues.
Only his mind knows
The thinness of the air he breathes,
The pale, insipid blood
   that runs in his veins.

: Re: Broken
: DjDaveTrance June 13, 2009, 03:31:36 AM

Opz!! I think ORIGINAL POETRY ata dapat dito,
Yung kaw may gawa!!

Nice post anyway!!

: Re: Broken
: Kurimasu June 13, 2009, 03:38:17 AM

Ganda, gusto ko yung title nung time na broken ako. ayyyy, hindi pala broken yung time ko na yun, broke lang pala. naubusan ako ng budget e. Bwahahahahahaha  toast::

: Re: Broken
: manyakihiro June 13, 2009, 03:44:34 AM

: DjDaveTrance  June 13, 2009, 03:31:36 AM

Opz!! I think ORIGINAL POETRY ata dapat dito,
Yung kaw may gawa!!

Nice post anyway!!

isa po sa multiple personality ni boy manyak-ihiro.   malayo lang ang trips nila sa isat-isa hehe, kaya nilagyan ko po name...nextime di ko nalagyan name para di makalito  ;D. thanks po!

: Re: Broken
: Kurimasu June 13, 2009, 03:47:33 AM

: manyakihiro  June 13, 2009, 03:44:34 AM

isa po sa multiple personality ni boy manyak-ihiro.   malayo lang ang trips nila sa isat-isa hehe, kaya nilagyan ko po name...nextime di ko nalagyan name para di makalito  ;D. thanks po!

may multiple personaliy ka pala kapatid, bwahahahahahaha, ako personality ko 1/2 na lang. hindi ko pa nahanap yung ibang ako kahapon e. I'm still putting myself together. Sana mahanap ko na yung iba. Nice poem. finger4u toast::

: Re: Broken
: DjDaveTrance June 13, 2009, 03:51:45 AM

: manyakihiro  June 13, 2009, 03:44:34 AM

isa po sa multiple personality ni boy manyak-ihiro.   malayo lang ang trips nila sa isat-isa hehe, kaya nilagyan ko po name...nextime di ko nalagyan name para di makalito  ;D. thanks po!

Ah kaya pala!!
hehehe nakakalilito lang kasi!

Tuloy ang ligaya!!
 toast::

: Re: Broken
: sapik75 June 13, 2009, 09:15:10 AM

Nice one bro...


Once I was...
Now I am Longing...
But never contemplated...
The blessed day thy come...
And all that have been broken...
Will rise and be rebuilt... finger4u

: Re: Broken
: manyakihiro June 22, 2009, 05:55:56 PM

hmmm... mali gamit ko ng word feign.  kelangan baguhin bago isave sa archives ko hehe toast:: toast::

: Re: Broken
: chibog09 August 30, 2009, 02:47:30 AM

ayos lang yan boss , , nice poem! dami palang makata dito, mapababae o mapalalake man!