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Espiya Lobby => ESPIYA Cafe => Original Poetry => : icecoldchiq July 17, 2013, 03:41:15 AM

: An Old Man’s Secret
: icecoldchiq July 17, 2013, 03:41:15 AM
Somewhere in the middle my hand is losing its grip.
Tell me where this is headed, this one-way trip.
It feels like a losing battle, getting tired of the same old plan.
I'm feeling lonely. Tell me, what's your secret old man?

Somehow in this lifetime, my days are starting to slow
Tell me where you’re going, I really wanna know.
The rain pouring down on me, weighing me down and low
I’m getting sick and tired. Tell me, where do I need to go?

Somewhere out in the urban jungle, my senses got old.
Tell me what this is worth, this conformity we were being sold.
The media that should protect us, the same culprit we’ll find.
I don’t know who I am. Tell me, when will you ever mind?

Some things are better left unsaid, stories you’d never hear.
Tell me what’s the use of honesty, or this unreasonable fear?
The bridges are burning, no more getting where we used to be
I’m damn tired and gone. Tell them, why don’t you care about me?
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: ☺☻JDC™ July 17, 2013, 12:42:13 PM
Miss ice matagal mo naba na collection toh???
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: icecoldchiq July 17, 2013, 02:14:11 PM
Miss ice matagal mo naba na collection toh???


Nope. Just wrote this today.
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: mangKulas July 17, 2013, 02:18:47 PM
Nice poem! Thanks for sharing Ms. Ice :)
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: stanlee1201 July 17, 2013, 08:32:10 PM
youre lossing your tracks ::pampam

tulungan mo sya old man.hehehe!

nice poem chiq.
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: nimrod July 17, 2013, 08:59:42 PM
For U miss Chiq  finger4u Nice one     
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: icecoldchiq July 18, 2013, 01:33:47 AM
Nice poem! Thanks for sharing Ms. Ice :)

Welcome :D

youre lossing your tracks ::pampam

tulungan mo sya old man.hehehe!

nice poem chiq.

lols. Thanks! Appreciated!


For U miss Chiq  finger4u Nice one     



Thanks :D  ;D
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: walaangay July 18, 2013, 05:31:05 AM
Nice poem! Its sentimental
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: icecoldchiq July 18, 2013, 06:08:27 AM
Nice poem! Its sentimental


Thanks you! :D
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: BlueAlphaZero July 18, 2013, 02:03:11 PM
I got a Tanya Donelly vibe from your poem, Page IceColdChiq. I can almost imagine you writing this with a guitar at hand. 
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: icecoldchiq August 01, 2013, 10:04:55 PM
I got a Tanya Donelly vibe from your poem, Page IceColdChiq. I can almost imagine you writing this with a guitar at hand. 


Thanks for taking the time to read! :D Though I forgot my guitar basics already, I did write just one song back then. Never made it to the radios.  laffman:: :D